Re: master 06f440eb81: ; Fix recent additions to Emacs manual

[Stefan Kangas <stefankangas@gmail.com>]

Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org> writes:

>
> branch: master
> commit 06f440eb814636fc6c5ed9d785a2f5ef980ea5e8
> Author: Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>
> Commit: Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>
>
>     ; Fix recent additions to Emacs manual
>
>     * doc/emacs/commands.texi (User Input, Mice): Fix punctuation,
>     indexing, and wording.
> ---
>  doc/emacs/commands.texi | 18 +++++++++++-------
>  1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/doc/emacs/commands.texi b/doc/emacs/commands.texi
> index 9d08dd057c..ada3bf6a43 100644
> --- a/doc/emacs/commands.texi
> +++ b/doc/emacs/commands.texi
> @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ where the @key{Meta} key does not function reliably.
>
>    Emacs has extensive support for using mouse buttons, mouse wheels
>  and other pointing devices like touchpads and touch screens.
> -@xref{Mice} for details.
> +@xref{Mice}, for details.
>
>  @cindex keys stolen by window manager
>  @cindex window manager, keys stolen by
> @@ -141,17 +141,20 @@ use @key{F1} to display a list of commands starting with @key{ESC}.
>
>  @node Mice
>  @section Mice
> +@cindexd mouse input

This is a nitpick, but...

Could we use the singular "mouse" instead of "mice" in the @node name?
For example, by naming it "Mouse input" or "Mouse events" or similar.

I believe that change might make it more immediately obvious to
non-native speakers of English.  (I usually only have one "mouse" on any
given machine, while having several "mice" sounds a bit unusual, to say
the least.)