From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Path: news.gmane.org!.POSTED!not-for-mail From: Eli Zaretskii Newsgroups: gmane.emacs.devel Subject: Re: Duplicate Phrasing in Emacs Manual Date: Sun, 15 Apr 2018 20:35:57 +0300 Message-ID: <834lkc4bk2.fsf@gnu.org> References: <8641b43c-cf98-e90b-4113-59b4e6f79eb1@disroot.org> Reply-To: Eli Zaretskii NNTP-Posting-Host: blaine.gmane.org X-Trace: blaine.gmane.org 1523813673 6503 195.159.176.226 (15 Apr 2018 17:34:33 GMT) X-Complaints-To: usenet@blaine.gmane.org NNTP-Posting-Date: Sun, 15 Apr 2018 17:34:33 +0000 (UTC) Cc: emacs-devel@gnu.org To: "Siraphob \(Ben\) Phipathananunth" Original-X-From: emacs-devel-bounces+ged-emacs-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Sun Apr 15 19:34:29 2018 Return-path: Envelope-to: ged-emacs-devel@m.gmane.org Original-Received: from lists.gnu.org ([208.118.235.17]) by blaine.gmane.org with esmtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1f7lXo-0001am-V8 for ged-emacs-devel@m.gmane.org; Sun, 15 Apr 2018 19:34:29 +0200 Original-Received: from localhost ([::1]:58453 helo=lists.gnu.org) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1f7lZv-0002FS-I4 for ged-emacs-devel@m.gmane.org; Sun, 15 Apr 2018 13:36:39 -0400 Original-Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:54435) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1f7lZG-0002FG-9v for emacs-devel@gnu.org; Sun, 15 Apr 2018 13:35:59 -0400 Original-Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1f7lZD-0008Cn-7T for emacs-devel@gnu.org; Sun, 15 Apr 2018 13:35:58 -0400 Original-Received: from fencepost.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::e]:48607) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1f7lZD-0008Cd-4J; Sun, 15 Apr 2018 13:35:55 -0400 Original-Received: from [176.228.60.248] (port=3506 helo=home-c4e4a596f7) by fencepost.gnu.org with esmtpsa (TLS1.2:RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA1:256) (Exim 4.82) (envelope-from ) id 1f7lZC-00068a-Gj; Sun, 15 Apr 2018 13:35:54 -0400 In-reply-to: <8641b43c-cf98-e90b-4113-59b4e6f79eb1@disroot.org> (siraben@disroot.org) X-detected-operating-system: by eggs.gnu.org: GNU/Linux 2.2.x-3.x [generic] X-Received-From: 2001:4830:134:3::e X-BeenThere: emacs-devel@gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.21 Precedence: list List-Id: "Emacs development discussions." List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: emacs-devel-bounces+ged-emacs-devel=m.gmane.org@gnu.org Original-Sender: "Emacs-devel" Xref: news.gmane.org gmane.emacs.devel:224620 Archived-At: > From: "Siraphob (Ben) Phipathananunth" > Date: Sun, 15 Apr 2018 08:44:34 +0700 > > On page 70 of the Emacs 26 manual (10.8 Bookmarks) the phrase > > > The prototypical use of bookmarks is to record where you were > > reading in various files. > > After listing out various keybindings, the manual continues with > > > The prototypical use for bookmarks is to record one current position > > in each of several files. So the command C-x r m, which sets a > > bookmark ... > > This is potentially confusing, so might I suggest changing the second > paragraph to > > > The command C-x r m, which sets a bookmark... Thanks, I've improved the wording there.