bug#12562: 24.1; GNU Emacs Lisp Reference Manual; Couple comma's lack, might cause fuss; Section 12.13, "Determining whether a Function is Safe to Call"; First paragraph; First Sentence.

bug#12562: 24.1; GNU Emacs Lisp Reference Manual; Couple comma's lack, might cause fuss; Section 12.13, "Determining whether a Function is Safe to Call"; First paragraph; First Sentence.

[Bruno Félix Rezende Ribeiro]

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In GNU Emacs Lisp Reference Manual, Section 12.13, entitled "Determining
whether a Function is Safe to Call", in the first paragraph and first
sentence one can read:

Some major modes such as SES call functions that are stored in user
files.

I took several seconds to realize the real sentence's meaning.  It could
be due to my poor english skills, because I'm not, actually, a native
english speaker; or my trend to read very fast when there isn't
punctuation; or even the several reading hours which I submitted
myself.  Though it's clear to me the sentence has only one possible
meaning by the context, I think if the expression "such as SES" _was_ surrounded by
commas the sentence would be fairly simple to understand and that change
won't cause any harm.  For instance:

Some major modes, such as SES, call functions that are stored in user
files.

Thanks in advance.

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In GNU Emacs 24.1.1 (i686-pc-linux-gnu, GTK+ Version 2.24.10)
 of 2012-08-26 on felix-laptop
Windowing system distributor `The X.Org Foundation', version 11.0.10903000
Configured using:
 `configure 'CFLAGS=-pipe -O3 -march=atom -mtune=atom -mmmx -msse -msse2
 -msse3 -mssse3 -mfpmath=sse''

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bug#12562: 24.1; GNU Emacs Lisp Reference Manual; Couple comma's lack, might cause fuss; Section 12.13, "Determining whether a Function is Safe to Call"; First paragraph; First Sentence.

[Glenn Morris]

Version: 24.3

OK, changed as you suggest in emacs-24 branch.

PS, have you considered sending diffs with your proposed changes?
Then the subjects would not need to be so long...