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From: Dani Moncayo <dmoncayo@gmail.com>
To: Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>
Cc: 18840-done@debbugs.gnu.org
Subject: bug#18840: 24.4; nt/README.W32: obsolete snippet
Date: Sun, 26 Oct 2014 18:55:21 +0100	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <CAH8Pv0i=vwocpfjNGu7bTAzCzDBx0Oz5HqVxrnsrHYAibWqNaQ@mail.gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <83egtu4up5.fsf@gnu.org>

>> -  Along with this file should be four subdirectories (bin, libexec,
>> -  share, and var).
>> +  The binary distribution has these top-level directories:
>> +
>> +  + bin: <explain briefly its contents>
>> +
>> +  + libexec: <explain briefly its contents>
>> +
>> +  + share: <explain briefly its contents>
>> +
>> +  + var: <explain briefly its contents>
>
> This is OK (and I don't think we must describe the contents of each
> subdirectory, but I will certainly not object to it).

Ok.  (I didn't describe them because I wouldn't know how, especially
with "share" and "var").

>>  * Setting up Emacs
>>
>> -  To install Emacs, simply unpack all the files into a directory of
>> +  To install Emacs, simply unpack the top-level directories into a directory of
>>    your choice.
>
> None of this is accurate.  Instead, we should say
>
>   To install Emacs, simply unpack the binary zip into a directory of
>   your choice.

Ok.  (I changed "zip" with "package" to make it more neutral wrt the
compression format)

Committed & closing this bug.

Thank you.

-- 
Dani Moncayo





  reply	other threads:[~2014-10-26 17:55 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 8+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2014-10-26  9:47 bug#18840: 24.4; nt/README.W32: obsolete snippet Dani Moncayo
2014-10-26 16:04 ` Eli Zaretskii
2014-10-26 16:49   ` Dani Moncayo
2014-10-26 17:17     ` Eli Zaretskii
2014-10-26 17:55       ` Dani Moncayo [this message]
2014-10-26 18:05         ` Dani Moncayo
2014-10-26 18:24           ` Eli Zaretskii
2014-10-26 18:40             ` Dani Moncayo

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