Does that all make sense and play by the rules (commit message)?

I specified you as the author (since all but some chars is from you),
and specified the date you had sent the patch as commit --date (aka
"author date").

Oh, and I don't know anything about `shr-kinsoku-shorten', I hope what I
wrote makes sense.

If you are agreed with everything, I plan to pull --rebase, and push.

Thanks for your review in advance.


Regards,

Michael.