Eli Zaretskii writes: > It is generally a good idea to have a @cindex entry with the name of > the section (but with lower-case letters), so that the section could > be easily found via Info-index. Thanks, done. > This style is better avoided: it produces long sentences that are hard > to grasp for non-native speakers, because the important part ("in") is > at the end. It is better to say it simply: > > Each window that displays an xwidget will also have a @dfn{xwidget > view}, ... > > And add a @cindex for "xwidget-view", again generally a good practice > of indexing each place that introduces new terminology (indicated by > @dfn). Likewise. > What about NS? And what about Wayland? I don't know exactly how it is handled on NS. On Wayland, it's still an X window that runs through Wayland's compatibility layer for X applications. (Like the rest of Emacs, at present.) > I'd drop the second of these sentences. It doesn't add anything to > the description. Done as well, please check the attached patch.