Eli Zaretskii [2023-06-12 11:09 -0400] wrote:

>> Cc: Yuan Fu <casouri@gmail.com>
>> Date: Mon, 12 Jun 2023 15:15:41 +0100
>> From:  Basil Contovounesios via "Bug reports for GNU Emacs,
>>  the Swiss army knife of text editors" <bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org>
>> 
>>  This function raises the @code{treesit-query-error} error if
>> -@var{query} is malformed.  The signal data contains a description of
>> +@var{query} is malformed.  The signal data contain a description of
>
> I think "data contains" looks better.  In general, "data" is used as
> singular in this and other similar cases.  (There are other such
> changes in the patch, which I'd rather drop.)

Done.

>>  It takes a series of @var{query-spec}s, where each @var{query-spec} is
>> -a @var{query} preceded by zero or more @var{keyword}/@var{value}
>> +a @var{query} preceded by zero or more @var{:keyword}/@var{value}
>                                           ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> This should be @code{:@var{keyword}} instead.  That is, the colon is
> not part of the meta-syntactic variable, it is a literal character.

I can agree with that, but the result looks a bit jarring to me: