Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org> writes:

>> From: npostavs@users.sourceforge.net
>> Cc: 24751@debbugs.gnu.org
>> Date: Sun, 01 Jan 2017 23:49:46 -0500
>> 
>> Everything you've said makes sense after your last message, but I'm
>> still unable to put it together and come up with a revised comment.
>> Could you make a suggestion?
>
> How about the below?

Looks good, I've incorporated it into the patch: