From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Path: news.gmane.io!.POSTED.blaine.gmane.org!not-for-mail From: Eli Zaretskii Newsgroups: gmane.emacs.bugs Subject: bug#64045: [PATCH] Improve wording of the documentation about declare form Date: Tue, 13 Jun 2023 16:46:47 +0300 Message-ID: <83cz1zwk3c.fsf@gnu.org> References: Injection-Info: ciao.gmane.io; posting-host="blaine.gmane.org:116.202.254.214"; logging-data="17502"; mail-complaints-to="usenet@ciao.gmane.io" Cc: 64045@debbugs.gnu.org To: Shynur Xie Original-X-From: bug-gnu-emacs-bounces+geb-bug-gnu-emacs=m.gmane-mx.org@gnu.org Tue Jun 13 15:47:17 2023 Return-path: Envelope-to: geb-bug-gnu-emacs@m.gmane-mx.org Original-Received: from lists.gnu.org ([209.51.188.17]) by ciao.gmane.io with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.92) (envelope-from ) id 1q94Mf-0004My-GS for geb-bug-gnu-emacs@m.gmane-mx.org; Tue, 13 Jun 2023 15:47:17 +0200 Original-Received: from localhost ([::1] helo=lists1p.gnu.org) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1q94MU-0002zv-Jt; Tue, 13 Jun 2023 09:47:06 -0400 Original-Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:470:142:3::10]) by lists.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1q94MQ-0002zE-LM for bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org; Tue, 13 Jun 2023 09:47:02 -0400 Original-Received: from debbugs.gnu.org ([209.51.188.43]) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_128_GCM_SHA256:128) (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1q94MQ-0005FQ-BI for bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org; Tue, 13 Jun 2023 09:47:02 -0400 Original-Received: from Debian-debbugs by debbugs.gnu.org with local (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1q94MQ-0007qm-67 for bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org; Tue, 13 Jun 2023 09:47:02 -0400 X-Loop: help-debbugs@gnu.org Resent-From: Eli Zaretskii Original-Sender: "Debbugs-submit" Resent-CC: bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org Resent-Date: Tue, 13 Jun 2023 13:47:02 +0000 Resent-Message-ID: Resent-Sender: help-debbugs@gnu.org X-GNU-PR-Message: followup 64045 X-GNU-PR-Package: emacs X-GNU-PR-Keywords: patch Original-Received: via spool by 64045-submit@debbugs.gnu.org id=B64045.168666399830144 (code B ref 64045); Tue, 13 Jun 2023 13:47:02 +0000 Original-Received: (at 64045) by debbugs.gnu.org; 13 Jun 2023 13:46:38 +0000 Original-Received: from localhost ([127.0.0.1]:41585 helo=debbugs.gnu.org) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1q94M2-0007q8-K4 for submit@debbugs.gnu.org; Tue, 13 Jun 2023 09:46:38 -0400 Original-Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([209.51.188.92]:36038) by debbugs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.84_2) (envelope-from ) id 1q94Lz-0007pu-O2 for 64045@debbugs.gnu.org; Tue, 13 Jun 2023 09:46:36 -0400 Original-Received: from fencepost.gnu.org ([2001:470:142:3::e]) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1q94Lu-00056C-5M; Tue, 13 Jun 2023 09:46:30 -0400 DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; q=dns/txt; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gnu.org; s=fencepost-gnu-org; h=References:Subject:In-Reply-To:To:From:Date: mime-version; bh=KfU2dapUYZeiAs4x7qitkJOtrnIN7ugs9+M54Xd3utw=; b=IEmsaDlUlLpZ KiaY+Iwn8Cp6gChUbZGwLqShInnWP9PbAvQsrwVwYwRZunBN93IFktRIAZFFD+qeWE312m8Ub4mTD ropaVH82IcoVQC43+aA7Xw2i6llDkhLB1oy/FusdvjBWRIotIw04swGD/N1EfeSAiu4b8YHT1SNCr O3i0oYAC+Euv5i7xRttxlByL8xZuBGsSe107wCvxXJ7xfRhEAwiC1x17vY+0Bq7OUi/OojTbVzZNl mjBNXGib0ZsoipTzYW+h2iyk6VHCAbBtmnN4WX+ySH3b1GftLFv4mYVabvDlUwnlPUWRbdbSu9HP0 EWHygNxrTmrq612sRzZAmg==; Original-Received: from [87.69.77.57] (helo=home-c4e4a596f7) by fencepost.gnu.org with esmtpsa (TLS1.2:ECDHE_RSA_AES_256_GCM_SHA384:256) (Exim 4.90_1) (envelope-from ) id 1q94Lt-0000Q6-Q7; Tue, 13 Jun 2023 09:46:29 -0400 In-Reply-To: (message from Shynur Xie on Tue, 13 Jun 2023 13:36:50 +0000) X-BeenThere: debbugs-submit@debbugs.gnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.18 Precedence: list X-BeenThere: bug-gnu-emacs@gnu.org List-Id: "Bug reports for GNU Emacs, the Swiss army knife of text editors" List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: bug-gnu-emacs-bounces+geb-bug-gnu-emacs=m.gmane-mx.org@gnu.org Original-Sender: bug-gnu-emacs-bounces+geb-bug-gnu-emacs=m.gmane-mx.org@gnu.org Xref: news.gmane.io gmane.emacs.bugs:263318 Archived-At: > From: Shynur Xie > Date: Tue, 13 Jun 2023 13:36:50 +0000 > msip_labels: > > I modified section 13.14 (The declare form) of the GNU Emacs Lisp > Reference Manual. The manual didn't say how to make > > (declare (completion ...) > (modes ...)) > > take effect; the original text is even somewhat misleading. Simply > evaluating a (defun ...) form which includes the above declare form > won't make Emacs filter commands when asking for completion in M-x. Thanks, but the text you suggest reads as more complex and harder to understand. So how about explaining what was wrong or missing or unclear in the original text? Then I could come up with a better wording.