Thanks for taking a look.

On 10/12/2022 11:35 PM, Eli Zaretskii wrote:
> It is generally a good idea to have a @cindex entry for the main topic
> of a section/subsection.  Usually, the @cindex entry is just the node
> or section name, with all of its words down-cases.

Done (for both subsections).

> My other general comment is to never miss an opportunity of adding a
> cross-reference when you reference a term or a symbol described
> elsewhere in the documentation.  Never assume the reader already knows
> what all the stuff you reference is about.  For example:
[snip]
> This will benefit from a cross-reference to where 'setq' is described
> in the ELisp reference manual.

Thanks, added a cross-reference here.

> Please review the documentation changes for more cross-reference
> opportunities like this one.

I also added cross-references to the Remote Files section of the Emacs 
manual, plus to the section on let-binding. Those seemed like the most 
useful ones to me, although maybe there are some others I missed.

I attached an updated version of patch 0002 with the manual changes (the 
others are unchanged).